paperdaixie.com今日要来共享较为艰难但很好用的內容，也就是大部分人到英文写作上经常产生的不正确，尝试训练阅读文章不正确创作案例，思索更顺畅合理的书写并把握住创作的关键。就可以另外防止小不正确，又可以让你的英文创作合理发展喔！
提议大伙儿看了初始版本号之后，先回过头来有哪些难题，如果是你会如何调整，再去看看调整版本号，那样能够保证自身有在思索，也较为可以协助你的英语发展喔！
六个普遍的创作不正确！你准备好了吗？要花一点时间阅读文章喔！
一、片段的句式（Sentence Fragments）：
要保证自身所应用的分号能连接起来2个语法恰当、含意表述详细的句式，还要当心英语口语上尽管是几句话，但实际上是要用分号相互连接的状况。
初始版本号：
Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings. For example, the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East.
调整版本号：
Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings. For example, the cloth contains the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East.
初始版本号：
Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption. Although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
调整版本号：
Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption, although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
二、绕口的句式（Sentence Sprawl）：
有时大家经常由于汉语的「由于...因此...」就立即把Because...so...这相似个「级别」的连词，用在同一个语句中，或是是相互连接了太长的语句，这都是会让英文阅读者感觉很疲倦。
初始版本号：
The hearing was planned for Monday, December 2, but not all of the witnesses could be available, so it was rescheduled for the following Friday. [这句话自身语法沒有不正确，可是阅读文章起來却十分的绕口不如意]
调整版本号：
The hearing, which had been planned for Monday, December 2, was rescheduled for the following so that all witnesses would be able to attend.
三、错置的或是不是适当的装饰（Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers）：
要记住你用的修饰句要考入你所需叙述的主关键词，还要保证你的修饰句在讲的哪个总体目标有出現在文章内容或语句中喔！
初始版本号：
When writing a proposal, an original task is set for research （这proposal是谁写的？）
调整版本号：
When writing a proposal, a scholar sets an original task for research.
四、构造不平行面（Faulty Parallelism）：
1.创作的情况下要留意前后左右的语句所应用的语态、句式都如果一致的2.如果你要举例说明的情况下，举的事例如果在一样的构造下能不容易令人感觉怪异，比如早饭有豆桨、炸油条、鸡蛋饼；跟早饭有豆桨、鸡蛋饼、美式早餐（美式早餐是早饭的种类、可是豆桨跟炸油条是早饭的新项目）
初始版本号：
The candidateʼs goals include winning the election, a health program, and education.
调整版本号：
The candidateʼs goals include winning the election, enacting a national health program, and improving the educational system. （由于后边尽管是接三个专有名词，可是她们前边的形容词也不同样，因此要还记得把形容词放进这一平行结构中）
初始版本号：
Some critics are not so much opposed to capital punishment as postponing it for so long.
调整版本号：
Some critics are not so much opposed to sentencing convicts to capital punishment as they are to postponing executions for so long.
五、代称不清楚（Unclear Pronoun Reference）：
应用代称能够让阅读文章的人更为轻轻松松通俗易懂，可是假如应用不正确或者不足清晰，便会令人感觉很疑虑。
初始版本号：
Einstein was a brilliant mathematician. This is how he was able to explain the workings of the universe.
调整版本号：
Einstein, who was a brilliant mathematician, used his quantitative ability to explain the workings of universe. （原来的This 并不了解他指的是什么）
初始版本号：
Because Senator Martin is less interested in the environment than in economic development, she sometimes neglects it.
调整版本号：
Because of her interest in economic development, Senator Martin sometimes neglects the environment.（本来的it非常容易令人搞不懂是environments 還是economic development)
六、代称的单复数与专有名词要一致（Pronoun Agreement）：
它是非常容易忽视的小地区，代称的功效是能够让专有名词能够无需一直反复出現，但是假如单复数沒有应用恰当得话，非常容易会令人疑虑。
初始版本号：
When a candidate runs for office, they must expect to have their personal life scrutinized.
调整版本号：
When candidates run for office, they must expect to have their personal lives scrutinized.
初始版本号：
According to tenets of the “new urbanism,” everyone needs to consider the relationship of their house to the surrounding community.
调整版本号：
According to tenets of the “new urbanism,” everyone needs to consider the relationship of his or her house to the surrounding community.（前边的everyone 后边并不是接their喔！）
祝贺你了进行啰！一段训练以后就需要为自己一些小小激励啦！期待在这里六项小不正确的训练中，可以使你在下一次英文写作的情况下，能够更合理地写成顺畅、最易读的文章内容，让我们一起奋斗吧！
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