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当句中包括2个之上的单独子句却未恰当联接时，即被称作连写句。单独子句是由一组字所构成、可单独成句的语句，比如：The horse runs。单独子句联接不正确很有可能造成 文意不清，使阅读者搞混。

连写句有二种种类：结合句（fused sentence）和分号拼凑句（comma splice）。

当单独子句间沒有标点或对等连词将其分离时，该句为结合句：

My professor read my paper she said it was excellent.

当2个之上的单独子句仅用分号分隔时，该句为分号拼凑句：

My dog barked angrily, I knew he wanted food.

解决方案

可应用下列四种方式改动连写句：

1. 应用一个分号和一个对等连词（ and, but, yet, so, or, nor, for ）

应用对等连词联接2个单独子句时，请在对等连词前面一个分号。

连写句（结合句）

My professor read my paper she said it was excellent.

连写句（分号拼凑句）

My professor read my paper, she said it was excellent.

调整（逗点 对等连词）

My professor read my paper , and she said it was excellent.

2. 应用分号（或是，在一些状况中，也可应用灶具或破折号）

可独立应用分号，或另加一个转折点语，比如：however、at any rate、in contrast、as a result等。转折点语后请还记得再加上一个分号，那么做不容易产生分号拼凑句，由于转折点语并不是一个单独子句

连写句（结合句）

My dog barked angrily I knew he wanted food.

连写句（分号拼凑句）

My dog barked angrily, I knew he wanted food.

调整（分号）

My dog barked angrily; I knew he wanted food.

调整（分号 转折点语 分号）

My dog barked angrily; therefore, I knew he wanted food.

3. 将单独子句分离，使其变成详细句

若在其中一个单独子句十分长，则提议应用这一方式。

连写句（分号拼凑句）

It seemed to Jane that her son had more than enough pens, they were strewn across the bedroom floor, and some of them were broken, worse still, someone had used the tip of a red pen to mark a smiley face on the wall.

调整（将语句分离） 

It seemed to Jane that her son had more than enough pens. They were strewn across the bedroom floor, and some of them were broken. Worse still, someone had used the tip of a red pen to mark a smiley face on the wall.

4. 资产重组语句，将在其中一个子句改成附设子句

若在其中一个子句的必要性好像小于别的子句，便可将该句改成附设子句。下列为好多个词组，在其中被改成附设子句的子句以道德底线表明。特别注意的是，改变后的附设子句已不是单独子句，没法独立变成一详细句。

连写句（分号拼凑句）

The largest tree by volume in the world is the General Sherman Sequoia, it is a little over 52,500 cubic feet.

调整（句尾改成附设子句）

The largest tree by volume in the world is the General Sherman Sequoia, which is a little over 52,500 cubic feet .

连写句（分号拼凑句）

Richard Chen is a professor at National Taiwan University, he wrote the novel The longest sleep .

调整（句中改成附设子句）

Richard Chen, a professor at Princeton University , wrote The longest sleep .

连写句（分号拼凑句）

I told my roommate I would be late, she still locked me out.

调整（句首改成附设子句）

Although I told my roommate I would be late , she still locked me out.

连写句（结合句）

I told the children I would read to them they said they wanted to sit by me so they could look at the pictures.

调整（句首改成附设子句）

When I told the children I would read to them , they said they wanted to sit by me so they could look at the pictures.

Reference:

Hacker, Diana. A Writer's Reference. 5th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2003. Print. 200–06.

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