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Lord Heseltine's Letter to May

什么叫做英文写作水平？

中国学员很有可能觉得，句式愈繁杂，汉字愈晦涩难懂，就表示英文工作能力越好。

我接到许多 留学申请，托福雅思优秀作文，句式超级繁杂，但是确是从头开始错到尾。

英语句式主关键词、形容词、附设子句如何构架十分的清晰，并不是加一个which還是that就作为「子句」再次接下来，愈长愈励害。

也不是把所有的字都代换为更少见的字，也无论新的字是不是适用这一情况，就表明一个字量大。

这篇新闻报道有详细的发刊 Lord Heseltine 写給英国总统 May的信。 Heseltine因为不赞同英国退欧，被May辞退。辞退后，他写了这一封信给May。

恶性事件情况只必须大概掌握就行。希望同学们看的是信的內容、句式、汉字。

句式十分有转变性，Heseltine应用一般句式，交叉繁杂句式，也是有三个字创立一句的稍短语句，出現2次。

汉字全是用正常的英文字，有一些字同学们很有可能不明白，但是它是政冶有关的字，還是归属于正常英文一个字量范畴的字。

语句长度摇缀，那样阅读文章起來才有节奏感。汉语句式注重排比句，因此都需要一样长较为超好听。英语句子则是要有节奏感才会超好听。

这一封信是说白了的美国「名流资产阶级」的人写出来的英文。学术研究英语中有一些专家学者也会用这一类的英语，尤其是文史类课程。

可是必须留意的是，句式尽管长，构架還是很清晰，含意還是非常好懂。

这第一封信参了几句各仅有三个字。

有时候我将同学们的文章内容裁短，同学们一看一句仅有十个字不上，反问到我：「语句那么短，英语看上去是否会很差？」

实际上愈英文创作，愈会出現句式长度摇缀的创作，不论是写宣布的信，写学术研究文章内容，写网络小说，都是会有这类状况。

英语解读：

标深蓝色的是原信函语句，标翠绿色的是语法句式。

I appreciate your kind remarks about my service to our country and our party.

第一句是规范的主关键词加形容词句式。

Particularly I am grateful for your thanks for the help I have been able to give to the recent coalition and then the majority governments led by David Cameron and yourself.

I am grateful for N.

Your thanks 中的 thanks是专有名词，句式为 your thanks for N. = your thanks for the help (which) I have been able to give to N. and N.

I am grateful for your thanks for the N.

I am grateful for your thanks for the help which I have been able to give to A and then B.

A = the recent coalition

B = the majority governments led by David Cameron and yourself

give to 以后，接2个专有名词，第一个是 the recent coalition，第二个是 the majority government。这儿他是在说2010年英国国会总统大选的情况下，创立coalition政府部门，由于沒有一切一党有一半以上座次。

2015年的美国国会总统大选，Conservatives完胜，有一半以上座次，因此是 the majority government。

The majority governments用复数，是由于一开始是 Cameron领着的，之后由于退欧，Cameron倒台，变为May领着，全部2个governments。

I was never a member of one of these governments, a point I invariably made when addressing audiences about my work. I offered advice which ministers were free to accept, reject or ignore.

a point 那一句为前边的部分的同位格， I was never a member of one of these governments 这件事情，便是 a point I invariably made.

I offered advice which ministers were free to accept, reject or ignore.

能够注意到的一点是，or 前边沒有分号，如果有分号得话，它是相互连接三个新项目，最后一个新项目以前加分号，这一叫 Oxford comma。英语语法中，有一些人觉得一定要加这一分号，有一些人感觉不用加。这是一个会引起文法学家对决的话题讨论。

一切正常而言，不用加，除非是 A, B or C 中的 C尤其的长，为了更好地不必让大伙儿误解，会加一个分号。

You say in your letter that I will understand the necessity to end that relationship. Here we disagree.

上边这一句仅有三个字。因为仅有三个字，节奏感尤其显著，语调有礼貌，而坚定不移的抵制。

上边这一句仅有三个字，下一句则超级繁杂。

In the referendum campaign it was recognised that so deeply held and so divided were the views on both sides that members of the Cabinet and other ministers were free to argue and vote against the government’s European policy without sanction.

句式为：

... it was recognised that so deeply held ... were the views that N. V.

... it was recognised that so deeply held ... were the views that members .... were ...

be free to argue and vote 中的 and 是相互连接2个形容词。

这一句式跟下列语句一样：

We saw that the pig was so fat that it could not pass through the door.

It was recognised that so deeply held were the views that members were free to argue.

超简单句式，配搭超繁杂句式，节奏性十分的棒。有坚定不移的三个字表述抵制建议的summary，下面一串用繁杂句式叙述抵制的情况。

In my speech I made clear that my vote neither held up nor denied your ability to trigger Article 50.

I made clear that N. V.

neither did something nor did something

Indeed the urgency about which we heard so much at the time seems in the event somewhat diminished.

The urgency seems diminished.

We heard so much about the urgency at the time.

My only vote was designed to give the House of Commons a second chance to enshrine in law a commitment you yourself had already given to allow Parliament a vote on any Brexit deal.

My only vote was designed to give N. 间接纳词.

= My only vote was designed to give the House of Commons a second chance.

to enshrine in law a commitment (which) you yourself had already given (in order) to allow Parliament a vote on any Brexit deal

The commons declined the advice of the Lords and I and most Peers accepted the position.

一切正常而言，如果and是相互连接几句语句，应当得加分号。因此Lords跟 and正中间应当要有分号。这儿我还在挑剔。

最终几句最强有力。

The simple fact remains that you have changed your mind since the excellent speech you made in the Referendum campaign arguing that we should remain in the European Union. I have not.

一样的，是一句比较复杂的句式，配搭一句仅有三个字的末尾。

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