Commentary怎么写?critical essay怎么写?

当专家教授得出一个assignment规定你创作一篇有关文学类、有关影片、有关戏剧表演的commentary时,你了解要怎么写吗?坚信许多同学们压根不清楚commentary是啥,那麼做为技术专业代笔组织,文中paperdaixie.com我就为大伙儿分析commentary写作技巧。

Commentary怎么写?

很有可能大伙儿会将summary和commentary搞混,下边致诚我先解释一下毕业论文中恶性事件小结(summary)和事件评价(commentary)的差别,并向大伙儿展现怎样运用 commentary 和 summary 紧密结合使文章内容看上去更幸福。

commentary和summary中间的差别

你需要掌握Summary和Commentary以前的差别,关键有三个层面:


Summary是简易小结详细介绍事儿(恶性事件)的关键点

Commentary是一系列的表述和表明

Summary关键滞留在表层

Commentary是发掘创作目标多方面的物品

Summary主要是现有內容的提炼出和反复

Commentary是原創的內容

Summary仅有一种特点,也仅有这类方式:你阅读文章或是收看一个著作,随后提炼出和反复写出这一著作是有关哪些的。

下边是一个现实生活中Summary和Commentary的事例。

在日常生活中,你见到的影片叙述或是某这书扉页的一些文本便是Summary。例如《教父II》在IMDb的影片叙述:

《教父II》在IMDb的电影描述

但你日随处可见的书评或是电影影评就归属于Commentary,例如下边这一来源于Rotten Tomatoes的评价:

Commentary示例

针对《教父II》的Summary和Commentary的关键差别便是Summary只包含影片的引言而沒有对影片的建议和点评。但在Rotten Tomatoes的电影影评中包括了对影片的详尽点评和得分。

Summary和Commentary范例

在了解了Summary和Commentary的状况下,大家如今来用事例做一个示范性。我在一部电影 Shaun of the Dead 中选择一个情景各自开展 summary和commentary。由于大家如今必须用这一部可怕喜剧电影做为实例,假如你沒有看了这部影片,很有可能你需要先收看一遍这部影片,自然,我保证,这一影片很好看。

此外,为了更好地此次的示范性,我们可以根据 Youtube 再温习一遍上边常说的,我此次必须开展评价的这部影片中的那一部分情景.

最先,看一下我是假如对这一幕情景开展小结的,下列是这幕情景的Summary范例:

In this scene from the 2004 movie Shaun of the Dead, Shaun (played by Simon Pegg) wakes up with a hangover and walks to the convenience store to buy a soda and an ice cream. In his hungover condition, he does not notice anything that is going on around him. On his way to the store, he walks by what appears to be zombies roaming the street. There is mayhem all around him. A car window is smashed and the alarm is blaring, a person is running for his life away from zombies, there are bloody handprints on the cooler, and the convenience store clerk is missing. On his way home, Shaun passes even more zombies, including one who he mistakes for a homeless person. When the zombie approaches him, Shaun says, “No, I don’t have any change. I didn’t even have enough for the shop.” He makes it home safely and turns on the TV, ignoring the news reports about the zombie invasion.

上边这一段Summary可以说极致的小结了这一幕情景,它没法出示附加的信息内容,我小结了这一电影对白,转述了电影中发生什么事事儿,也没有探讨我对这一影片的一切点评或是对它主要表现出一切兴趣爱好或是厌烦。

如果你的专家教授规定你出示一个电影影评工作时,他并并不是希望你出示一个详尽的 Summary 回望全部影片的恶性事件,即便 像上边那般极致的 Summary也是不好的。Summary仅仅一个回望,并不意味着你的观念,专家教授要的就是你的观念。

实际上,你对恶性事件的情况开展简略的 summary,可以为你的电影影评和评价出示全篇情况,上边的 Summary 就可以做为大家评价的恶性事件情况。

而在实际创作中,我们在创作电影影评叙述自身的见解和评价的另外,能够穿插着进行 Summary这件事情,也就是说,你一直在创作Summary的另外,能够穿插着进行Commentary,进而进行全篇文章。如今大家就来逐渐进行此项工作中。

1. 一个确立的见解 (Opinion)

最先,我能在我的summary中插进一条我的见解认为,功效取决于注重我的建议趋向,并协助阅读者追随我的总体构思文章阅读。

In this clever and satirical scene from the 2004 movie Shaun of the Dead, Shaun (played by Simon Pegg) wakes up with a hangover and walks to the convenience store to buy a soda and an ice cream.

2. 一段简略的表明 (Interpretation)

下面,我能向的summary中插进一小段解释性的表明:

In his hungover condition, he does not notice anything that is going on around him. This provides insight on how Shaun, like many of us, lives his day-to-day life, almost as a zombie himself, just going through the motions without noticing the world in which he lives.

3. 一丝的与众不同看法 (Insight)

再出来,插进一些个人观点:

On his way to the store, he walks by what appears to be zombies roaming the street. There is mayhem all around him, but this mayhem isn’t a far cry from Shaun’s daily reality. A car window is smashed and the alarm is blaring. Today it is from a zombie, but on a normal day, a regular thief could have smashed it. A person is running for his life away from zombies, but on a normal day, it could be a person running to catch the bus.

4. 适当的本人反映 (Personal Reaction)

此外,再向summary中插进一些我的本人反映:

There are bloody handprints on the cooler, and the convenience store clerk is missing, which, along with the creepy music soundtrack, gives a sense of impending doom as the viewer watches Shaun obliviously bumble along.

5. 精确的建议点评 (Evaluation)

最终,在 summary中插入我自身的个人评价和大量的建议看法:

On his way home, Shaun passes even more zombies, including one who he mistakes for a homeless person. When the zombie approaches him, Shaun says, “No, I don’t have any change. I didn’t even have enough for the shop.” Incidents like these make this film the perfect satirical comedy about what it means to be alive in the 21st century. This is emphasized again when Shaun makes it home safely and turns on the TV, ignoring the news reports about the zombies. This brilliant satire points to the sad fact that a typical person’s life is already so horrible that a zombie apocalypse wouldn’t even mark a change for the worse.

commentary范文

最后,大家获得了一篇 Shaun of the Dead 某一幕情景的commentary范例,以下:

In this clever and satirical scene from the 2004 movie Shaun of the Dead, Shaun (played by Simon Pegg) wakes up with a hangover and walks to the convenience store to buy a soda and an ice cream.

In his hungover condition, he does not notice anything that is going on around him. This provides insight on how Shaun, like many of us, lives his day-to-day life, almost as a zombie himself, just going through the motions without noticing the world in which he lives.

On his way to the store, he walks by what appears to be zombies roaming the street. There is mayhem all around him, but this mayhem isn’t a far cry from Shaun’s daily reality. A car window is smashed and the alarm is blaring. Today it is from a zombie, but on a normal day, a regular thief could have smashed it. A person is running for his life away from zombies, but on a normal day, it could be a person running to catch the bus.

There are bloody handprints on the cooler, and the convenience store clerk is missing, which, along with the creepy music soundtrack, gives a sense of impending doom as the viewer watches Shaun obliviously bumble along.

On his way home, Shaun passes even more zombies, including one who he mistakes for a homeless person. When the zombie approaches him, Shaun says, “No, I don’t have any change. I didn’t even have enough for the shop.” Incidents like these make this film the perfect satirical comedy about what it means to be alive in the 21st century. This is emphasized again when Shaun makes it home safely and turns on the TV, ignoring the news reports about the zombies. This brilliant satire points to the sad fact that a typical person’s life is already so horrible that a zombie apocalypse wouldn’t even mark a change for the worse.

别的必须考虑到的创作标准

从上边你早已见到在实际中的commentary创作,下边,我想强调一些一样关键的标准,来协助你更强的创作毕业论文。

标准1: 防止主观性的语句

即便 在创作中的內容是个人观点和建议,但也必须在这其中防止应用主观性的句子,例如:“I hope”,“I believe”,或是“I think”等语句句子。这种口语体语句会使你的文章内容繁杂沉余(由于很显著,你写一篇essay的目地便是表述你所感),而且会在一定水平上减少你的真实度。

标准2: 维持 Commentary和Summary占比 2:1

在一般状况下,你应该出示二倍于情况客观事实叙述的评价和建议。虽summary针对展现阅读者情况专业知识很重要,但 commentary是写好一篇出色essay的根本所在。

标准3: 按照专家教授的标准创作

在具体创作中,有时候专家教授很有可能只希望你对某事情得出建议见解;另一些情况下,专家教授很有可能只希望你出示你对某事的洞悉和表述;也有一些情况下,专家教授很有可能让你大量的自由空间开展单独创作。不管专家教授得出哪种写作指导和规定,必须记牢的是,严苛依照专家教授的工作标准创作是最重要的。

发表评论

客服一号:点击这里给我发消息
客服二号:点击这里给我发消息
微信客服1:essay-kathrine
微信客服2:essay-gloria