写英文作文的情况下,假如可以合理开展最终查验,实际上可以让整体的英文优秀作文质量更为提高,可是关键是,应当要查验什么地方呢?创作的语法、标点、还是英文一个字呢?延续上一次的训练,应用词组的训练方式实际上便是在尝试英文写作的最后一步:查验的方法。
一、不正确的代称应用(Incorrect Pronoun Case):
很常碰到的状况便是代称到底是要用主关键词還是受词、還是全部词?这在创作较为非常容易防止,但实际上也很常产生在口说的难题中,因此就从今天开始留意这种小关键点吧!
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Castroʼs communist principles inevitably led to an ideological conflict between he and President Kennedy.
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Castroʼs communist principles inevitably led to an ideological conflict between him and President Kennedy.
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Because strict constructionists recommend fidelity to the Constitution as written, no one objects more than them to judicial reinterpretation.
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Because strict constructionists recommend fidelity to the Constitution as written, no one objects more than they to judicial reinterpretation.
二、忘记逗点(Omitted Commas):
逗点除开能够用于区别词意、语句中间的关联外,较大 的主要用途還是让阅读者可以喘一口气,但这确实十分必须工作经验跟很多阅读文章来磨炼啰!
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When it comes to eating people differ in their tastes.
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When it comes to eating , people differ in their tastes.
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The Huns who were Mongolian invaded Gaul in 451.
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The Huns , who were Mongolian , invaded Gaul in 451. [“Who were Mongolian”尽管有出示表明,可是并不危害全句的词意,归属于非限制子句,因此要用逗点分隔喔!]
三、过多逗点(Superfluous Commas):
想起什么就先逗点一下吗?实际上那样会让阅读者十分不太好阅读文章,要当心自身用了过多多余的逗点。
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Field trips are required, in several courses, such as, botany and geology.
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Field trips are required in several courses, such as botany and geology.
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The term “scientific illiteracy,” has become almost a cliché in educational circles.
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The term “scientific illiteracy” has become almost a cliché in educational circles.
四、错用标点(Comma Splice):
如果是2个单独含意的语句,除非是再加上有转折点、持续含意的连词,不然不必独立用逗点相互连接,能够挑选改成句号、分号,或是是调用语句来让构造更精准。
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In 1952 Japanʼs gross national product was one third that of France, by the late 1970s it was larger than the GNPs of France and Britain combined.
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In 1952 Japanʼs gross national product was one third that of France . By the late 1970s it was larger than the GNPs of France and Britain combined.
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Diseased coronary arteries are often surgically bypassed, however half of bypass grafts fail within ten years.
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Diseased coronary arteries are often surgically bypassed ; however , half of bypass grafts fail within ten years.
五、错用省去汉字(Apostrophe Errors):
有时用全部词跟形容词确实非常容易令人弄混,要还记得区别清晰什么时候用全部词(His)何时是用形容词(He's),也有复数使用方法还要当心。
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In the current conflict its uncertain whoʼs borders their contesting.
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In the current conflict it is [itʼs] uncertain whose borders they are [theyʼre] contesting.
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The Aztecs ritualʼs of renewal increased in frequency over the course of time.
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The Aztecsʼ ritual s of renewal increased in frequency over the course of time.
六、应用易搞混字(Words Easily Confused):
比如Effect(实际效果;专有名词)Affect(危害;形容词),也有Lead/Led及其accept/except这些,这种一旦用错全部含意便会差到十万八千里远啰,这就需要靠平时一个字量的积累来防止了!
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The recession had a negative affect on sales.
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The recession had a negative effect on sales. (or) The recession affected sales negatively.
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The laboratory instructor choose not to offer detailed advise.
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The laboratory instructor chose not to offer detailed advice .
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