文书essay写作如何申请卡内基梅隆商学院?

<span style="font-size:14px">　　假如说申请办理的全过程便是一个自身营销推广（Personal Branding）的全过程，这一展现的全过程有两个关键要素，一个是商品自身&mdash;&mdash;申请人本身的情况和工作能力，一个是包裝&mdash;&mdash;怎样依照招收官的要求展现申请人最好是的一面。在包裝里，公文是遭受较大 高度重视，也是许多同学们最头痛的一部分。我志向每星期为大伙儿讲解一段公文撰写和改动的分析，争得将大家普遍的文书写作中的难题以丰厚的方法展现出去。今日paperdaixie.com我即将详细介绍的是<strong>公文Essay创作</strong>具体指导。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">公文essay写作思路</span>
<strong><span style="font-size:14px">　　Essay的创作</span></strong>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　和PS不一样，Essay主要是对于申请办理新项目明确提出的特殊难题开展回应，和中国的命题作文相近。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　为了更好地写出去一篇达标的、取得成功的国际商学院essay，最先要了解国际商学院设定给出essay的目地，以申报人碰到的数最多的两大类essay题型（Leadership和Teamwork）为例子，大家当期将最先为大伙儿共享Teamwork的创作:</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　院校/新项目规定申报人进行Teamwork公文的目地:</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　Admission officer/国际商学院期待看申报人是不是可以在短期内内非常好的将自身融进到一个全新升级的精英团队/新项目里。而且在以后的学习中可以非常好的和自身的同学们或teammates协作做到最好是的結果，可以非常好的和别的精英团队/新项目组员产生好的化学变化，互相促进提升 。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　在了解了出卷目地之后，大家才可以更清晰的了解，teamwork essay应当从哪几个方面去呈现自身。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　可是大家也发觉在teamwork这一类文书写作的全过程中，许多老同学聚会有一些忽视的关键点，例如Teamwork的界定里边&ldquo;Teamwork is the actions of individuals,brought together for a common purpose or goal,which subordinate the needs of the individual to the needs of the group.&rdquo;请一定留意这句话。在Teamwork essay的创作中，大家一般会论述以下几点：</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　1.你自己干了哪些</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　2.精英团队的别的组员干了哪些</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　这两个方面较为非常容易忽视掉，非常容易导致2种极端化：全是自身的贡献；自身在精英团队里边沒有显著的奉献，因此在全部小故事叙述时，一定要搞好个人与全部精英团队中间均衡。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　之上是基础理论一部分，下面大家看一下实战演练中如何去写一篇出色的teamwork essay，这儿大家還是最先会提及创作构造，这儿再度分享全能的PAR构造。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　我们在PAR构造基本上开展了一些提升，例如能够在PAR的基本上添加了project introduction；还可以在PAR的基本上，将result外置，让全部公文开始一部分更为让人印象深刻。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　或是能够在文章内容末尾一部分和新项目的特性融合在一起写，例如大家以前有一位人申请办理到Chicago MBA的同学们就在essay结尾说期待用自身以前滑板社的历经，在Booth创立第一届滑板社。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　Booth在招聘面试的情况下及其最终的录用offer里边都提及了：十分期待学员可以在Chicago Booth取得成功创立滑板社。</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　在文章内容的末尾一部分，大家融合所述故事线展现构造，用一位取得成功申请办理到CMU MSCF的学员公文为例子，让大伙儿有一个更形象化的觉得。</span>
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<strong><span style="font-size:14px">　　Essay全文</span></strong>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　After I came to Michigan,I realized that,compared to Ross School of Business,Michigan offered fewer resources to help its engineering and LSA students prepare for financial careers,who generally lacked awareness of the industry and the interview skills.I co-founded the Quant Finance&amp;Investment Club to address this</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　challenge,knowing it would be an uphill climb to train students and woo recruiters.</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　&mdash;&mdash;Situation and Result</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　I first approached students with financial industry exposure to form the new board.Second,my team and I persuaded Citibank Beijing and UBS Ann Arbor to offer our club members seventeen internship opportunities in total.Third,we persuaded Blue Trading Center in Ross to open to our club where Bloomberg Terminal became available.We created financial mathematics seminars with Professor David Nasha,vice director of undergraduate mathematics program.These early initiatives attracted more than 100 students.To grow our member&rsquo;s financial experience,we grouped our members into nine trading teams to compete against each other for the internship opportunities in Citibank and UBS.I even networked with financial engineering masters to teach us creating option pricing models.</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　&mdash;&mdash;Action</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　The biggest challenge was putting QIC on recruiters&rsquo;radar.My team and I attended each company presentation in the business school to directly market our club to recruiters.Recruiters from Morgan Stanley,Deutsche Bank and BNP Paribas were persuaded to give separate presentations to our club and separate interviews for our member.Last spring,9 QIC members found internships in investment banking industry in developed markets,who came back later and took the leadership roles this semester.</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　&mdash;&mdash;Challenges and Action,Result</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　This November,UBS Manager Tim Barry commented to QIC&rsquo;s board:&ldquo;I have witnessed many prepared students from QIC for our industry in terms of interview skills and industry understanding.&rdquo;Our team and I gained the experience of defining an opportunity,pursuing it,organizing around it,and making a real impact.I am proud that we helped many students reach a turning point in life,and more importantly,our board will help more LSA and engineering students to explore the finance world.</span>
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<span style="font-size:14px">　　&mdash;&mdash;Result</span>