高分essay代写写作:什么才是完美的Introduction?_文书修改

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高分数essay书写:防止应用口语英文,及其降低不必要关键点,选用『讲故事』或『举例说明』吸引住阅读者兴趣爱好。

对于创作题型”Do you like to eat out or eat at home?”我写了下边的Introduction:

『I loved to eat as a kid.I would eat anything out of my mom’s cooking.My mom used to cook the best chicken soup on earth,and the way she prepared the stir fried rice was so fantastic that I just kept eating and eating,bowl after bowl.Man,my mom fed me so well I became the fattest boy at my grade school and high school.She was the best mom in the whole world.My mom’s cooking was good,but I also liked to eat off the street vendors.They’ve got a wide variety of foods,like steamed stinky tofu,steaks,fried octopus ball,oily rice,and many other kinds you can think of.But you know what?My favorite of all time was deep fried chicken nugget Taiwanese style.No other fried chickens prepared in other cultures ever come close to our yummy chicken nugget,I tell you.So,I love homemade dishes and street food,but if I have to choose between them,I would probably go for street food.It just has more choices,and the thought of eating out alone kills me–the adventure of finding the food I like,the tasting of it,and of course the hot chicks swirling around me.That’s why I vote for dining out.”

那样书写的真实难题是在:

1,口语英文的应用。

2,过多不必要关键点。

可是,这类『讲故事』或『举例说明』的书写,是吸引住阅读者兴趣爱好的好方法。就留学考试、工作来讲,高分数重要之一,便是你的创作是不是吸引住阅读者。下边的改变,延用『讲故事』的书写,但內容、文本更精减︰

“A part of my fondest childhood memory is my mother’s cooking.She was skilled at turning simple ingredients into gourmet dishes,and enjoying her dishes was a sensuous experience to me every day.I was addicted to the heavenly smell and taste of her food until I moved out to attend college.That was the first time I was introduced to the wonder of street food.Often my friends and I would explore delicacies from one vendor to another,from one night market to another,and from one town to another.Over time,eating out has become part of my lifestyle.The way my mother prepared the food is unique in her own way,because of love and care she put into it,but what makes street food attractive to me is its wide range of selection,care-free enjoyment,and associated social functions.”

自然,这决不是唯一或最好是的Introduction。你也能够试着别的的书写。

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