盘点留学生在essay写作中常见的14个错误(下)


留学生essay写作


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      第八个不正确:乏力的修饰词



      除开词穷,和懒散,无法完全表述这一不正确的缘故。例如:nice, good, bad这种看起来恰当,具体却没有办法呈现叙述功效的修饰词,全是应当完全防止的。



      例如:

      Seoul is a good city for tourists. 



      能够改成:

      Seoul has a lot of facilities for tourists. 



      第九个不正确:随便地应用Get



      get一般 常见于英语口语表述,由于有过多更精确的形容词能够取代它。



      例如:

      The CEO was hospitalised after he got pneumonia.



      能够改成:

      The CEO was hospitalised after he caught pneumonia.



      又或是:

      Traditionally, children get presents from their parents on Christmas Day. 



      能够改成:

      Traditionally, children receive presents from their parents on Christmas Day. 



      第十个不正确:毫无价值的反复



      这一不正确有点儿相近汉语里的,凯旋而归。骏逸本来就会有获胜归来的意思。再加回归,这一“回”的姿势就反复了。



      例如:

      Students should learn and study English from a young age. 



      能够改成:

      Students should study English from a young age.



      又例如:

      Americans from the United States have higher rates of lung cancer. 



      能够改成:

      People from the United States have higher rates of lung cancer. 



      第十一个不正确:应用个人成长经历作事例



      见到这里,“键盘侠”又要蹦出来了,只有用想起个人成长经历做事例了,难道说不行吗?自然没有问题,但记牢就算应用本人事例,你也要把语调调节到宣布的自然环境下。



      例如:

      My parents frequently work late in order to make ends meet, and this has a big impact on the amount of time I get to communicate with them. 



      改成:

      My parents today are working longer hours in order to sufficiently provide for their children, which is having an enormous impact on the amount available time for face to face communication. 



      第十二个不正确:表述过度冗杂



      怎么判断语句写的冗杂?非常简单,把语句里英语单词一个个除掉,看什么除掉后,含意不会改变就意味着这个词不必要了!



      举个事例:

      Even if employees engage in their jobs for a long time, they often fail to climb the business ladder, which is regularly the most common goal, therefore, they must face the harsh reality of staying in the same position for years. 



      改成:

      Even if employees stay in one job for a long time, they will often fail to climb the business ladder. 



      第十三个不正确:不应用连词



      连词,除开让语句语调更畅达,也有个益处,是让阅读者能够提早分辨语句中间的逻辑顺序。



      例如:

      Mexicans will prefer Madrid as their most visited city. Americans will most likely go to Paris. Canadians love traveling to Istanbul the most.



      改成:

      To begin with, Mexicans will prefer Madrid as their most visited city. In contrast, Americans will most like to go to Paris. Lastly, Canadians love traveling to Istanbul the most.



      最后一个:不应用高级词汇



      这一与你累积英语单词有非常大关联,近义词的使用方法是最好拓展方式。形容词,修饰词,短语配搭是最非常容易拓展的。



      例如:

      Recent research done by Harvard University shows that 65% of Americans work more than 50 hours a week.



      改成:

      Recent research conducted by Havard University shows that 65% of Americans work more than 50 hours a week.



      这种个小不正确,看起来都无关紧要,可一旦出現数个,那麼essay的总体水准,便会被无形中的放低。到头来你能说,本来写的又对,又能论述,还不偏题,为什么教师一直刁难我国不上7呢?回答实际上就在这里了。平日里,培养一个出色的创作习惯性,可以耳濡目染的提升你写作能力。

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